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[Celitus]

I will restart this club cause i liked it

this is my latest song called cured



9 or so minutes long to play
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Cured

You know my mind was gone
It’s been for a while now lady
And now you know
You have left it a bit long
I tried to tell you
You know I did baby
But now I’m already gone

I tried to say
But I didn’t have
the heart maybe
And now something is telling me
There’s no turning back

I’ve been down this road
So many times baby
I know the path
From it’s front to it’s back
And the sights I see
No they haven’t changed lady
But something keeps on sending me back

I tried to say
But I didn’t have
the heart maybe
And now something is telling me
There’s no turning back

How can you say
I meant nothing to you baby
When I gave you everything you have
I should take it back
But I just cant lady
Cause I can still not
Stand to see you sad

I tried to say
But I didn’t have
the heart maybe
And now something is telling me
There’s no turning back

You have been calling out
But there is nobody home
Because after all
You said you want to be alone
Sometimes I wonder
What exactly u mean
Because you say one thing
And it sounds different to me

I tried to say
But I didn’t have
the heart maybe
And now something is telling me
There’s no turning back

You know hearts can change
It happened to me baby
Changed my mind
And I never looked back
Everything is fine
It could stay like that maybe
No matter what you can do
You can never turn back time

I tried to say
But I didn’t have
the heart maybe
And now something is telling me
There’s no turning back

The time has come
I think I know that for sure
To get over you
I think I need to be cured
I tried to say
But I didn’t have
the heart maybe
And now something is telling me
There’s no turning back

[fizza]

9 minutes, scaramush scaramush can you hear the fandango.

streetlamps
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woo (in the style of the woo in the bends by radiohead)
where can i go now
i'm walking alone
another street with no signs

falling away
as streetlamps guide my feet
it's all so quiet
need somewhere to meet

i have been here before
just a moments rest
just that something to adore


(back to falling away)

i'll pull throuth
as long at the're there
and the street light
better shine on too

(falling away)

[Digital Demon]

Here.. Instead of typing out the lyrics Do it om Finale 2005.

Finale

You can also write acoustic and bass with ur lyrics...

[fizza]

to be a rockstar

all i wanted when i was six
was a bmx and a twix
but now i am fifteen
and i want to hit the band scene

whoa to be a rock star
and to get the hell away from here
drivingg a brand new sports car
and crashing out with beer

got my first guitar
from my sister last week
said "just try it" my outlook was meek
couldn't play the "c" chord
oh help me please lord

whoa to be a rock star
and to get the hell away from here
drivingg a brand new sports car
and crashing out with beer

looks like all never make it
further than my garage door
i gotta six string and a bass guitar
looks like i'm not going anywhere
i'm stuck in my contrys tar

whoa to be a rock star
and to get the hell away from here
drivingg a brand new sports car
and crashing out with beer




god bless random top of the head songs before i do a gcse...

[Celitus]

MESSED UP FOOL




I live my simple life
I never had my own day
No parades waiting for me
But I guess thats just my way

Dont care what anybody says
I'm just me and thats ok
Dont be somebody
you know you shouldn't be

Maybe it's just life is cruel
That could be very true
But if you know and understand
you'll know just what to do

Liven life so u get the full
Not given a shit about what you'll do
Each time you see it
the message changes and It takes you for a fool

Each day
you say
that you understand
the world a little better
If it's true
Then you'll do
a hell of a lot better than I did

I Screwed up so many times I cant keep track
Im holding back to go
Sometime you feel that you
will explode
when that time comes
look back to me and you'll see
What a messed up fool you can be

Don't leave me with the lies you tell
YOu claim that you like me
but you can just burn in hell
For all your deciet and crap you like to say
You will be paying me back someday

someday day
when you see
The messed up fool you can be
You will find me waiting there
just to know you have seen the truth
and not just more lies and deciet
then you'll be the best messed up fool you can be

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This song means themost out of the songs Ihave wrote so dont steal it

[Celitus]

yes ter day

I worte 5 heavy metal songs

Apocolapse Now

God Almighty
wont u set me free
Don't you realise what Icould be
Is this a sign that death is on his way
Is this A sign i wont see tomorrow

Cause the apocolapse is now
there's nowhere to run
The apocolapse is now
wont this be fun

I guess it's time for a revolation
I wont go down without a fight
I dont meet your expectaions?
Holy shit your right

Cause the apocolapse is now
there's nowhere to run
The apocolapse is now
wont this be fun

I cant believe this is so messed up
I cant believe this was foretold
I wont believe you will punish all of us

the restwill go up later

[Mentok]

Here's mine


"Wouldn't it be ironic
If I died today
The day that you
Decided to
just go away.

The day that I handed you
the note that love
was poured into
the one that said
I can't live without you.


I can't live
without
your tears and yells
the way you scream
makes my ears swell
but atleast I know
that at the
end of the day!
You will always
be the same way.


Wouldn't it be ironic?
"It's like rain"?
I hate the way you play that
over and over again
it's such a pain.
You cry and tell me
I don't listen enough
But the problem is
I listen too much.
I've lost my voice
and I just nodd my head.
I may as well be nodding
'til I'm dead but

I can't live
without
your tears and yells
the way you scream
makes my ears swell
but atleast I know
that at the
end of the day!
You will always
be the same way.

Nothing Anymore
is the way that it was.
Except the love
you gave me
but only just because
I gave all hope
on waiting around for you.
You used me the
way that I used you.
Contradicting feelings
lead to
conflicting lives.
And at the end of the day
we can bathe in our lies.

I can't live
without
your tears and yells
the way you scream
makes my ears swell
but atleast I know
that at the
end of the day!
You will always
be the same way.

[Celitus]

that is ok but a little too emo for my likeing but that is a gd comment from me cause I hate most songs

[Mentok]

'Cuz you can't hear it in my head.

It's not death metal.


It's got a very Foo Fighters .....sound....


god what's the noise their guitars make?


The best I can do to describe it is *CHUM*

Not repetative emo *ch-ch-ch-ch-ch*

"CUT ME! CUT ME! TAKE MY HEART!"

This song is

*chum chum, dada-na na -na-nana- da da- na-nana- da da*

If you're saying it's emo you're reading too deeply. It's simply "I hate you cuz I love you and I don't want to anymore."

[fizza]

irony like hate this and i'll love you by muse

[Celitus]

yeah I always look at music deeply as it lets u understand the lyrics better

[DragoonHP]

Hey I just discovered this post. I have written a couple of songs.
This is the song I really like. Here are the first couple of lines:

Don't miss me;
When you and I are not together.

Don't miss me;
When fate test our love forever.

Don't miss me;
When I am on the other side of life.

Don't miss me,
When I can't stand by your side.

Tell me what do you think about the song.

Thanks.

[Cool lil Dude]

Hey I just discovered this post. I have written a couple of songs.
This is the song I really like. Here are the first couple of lines:

Don't miss me;
When you and I are not together.

Don't miss me;
When fate test our love forever.

Don't miss me;
When I am on the other side of life.

Don't miss me,
When I can't stand by your side.

Tell me what do you think about the song.

Thanks.

Necroposting record. To a thread that died for five years ago. Damn, this site was pretty active back then.